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Forever & Always.

She's sitting at the table, the hours getting later.
He was supposed to be here.
She's sure he would've called.
She waits a little longer; there's no one in the driveway.
No one says they've seen him.
Why, is there something wrong?
She looks back to the window.
Suddenly, the phone rings.
A voice says something's happened, that she should come right now.
Her mind goes to December
She thinks of when he asked her
He bent down on his knees first
And he said:


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I sat at the dining table wondering where the hell Soul was. It was getting late; the sun had long set and it was getting to be about midnight. "Dammit, Soul...you said you'd be home from work by eight...why didn't you call me if you were gonna be late?" I took the telephone and dialed for Tsubaki. My closest friend picked up on the second ring.

"Hello, Maka-chan?"

"Hey, Tsubaki-chan. Have you seen Soul? Did he go out with Blackstar or something?" I had a hint of desperation in my throat.

I couldn't tell what the camellia was thinking. "No, I haven't seen him. Let me go ask Blackstar." A moment of ruffling passed and I faintly heard Tsubaki question the Big Star if he's been with Soul. "No, he says he hasn't seen him. Why? Is something wrong, Maka-chan?"

"No, no, it's nothing. He's just late. Thanks. Bye," cutting of the line, I sighed. Now worry burrowed deep in my chest. "He's alright...he's alright...he's been late like this before, right? Yea, yea...that's it...he's just running overtime and he forgot to call me...he'll be home any minute." Knowing all that I did to comfort myself with was just denial, I tried my best to believe every bit of it. "Soul..."

The phone rang and I picked it up as fast as I could. "Hello?!"

"Maka," it was Dr. Stein. "Come to the Shibusen dispensary, now. Quickly, something's happened." Throwing the phone back down onto the receiver, I rushed to throw my jacket on.

My mind shifted back to December.

-It was Christmas Eve. We were all enjoying the Shibusen Foundation party since everyone was off work to make it. I was standing around the punch table speaking with Tsubaki, Liz, and Patty while all of the boys were doing God knows what. Then there was a yell that caught my attention. It was Blackstar.

"MAKAAAA! SOUL HAS SOMETHING TO TELL YOU!" The conceded boy was overjoyed and bouncing off of the walls. Kid followed with stars in his eyes.

Though everything was quite unusual to me, nothing could prepare my brain for the shock of my life.

There was Soul on the stage with the microphone in his hand. He beckoned me to come onto the platform with him. Following his gesture, the crowd blocking me from Soul  split and made a pathway that was far wider than my petite frame. When my heels clicked onto the ground in front of Soul, he bent down on his knees and pulled out a velvet box; it was slowly pried open by my boyfriend's fingers. When the diamond ring was shown to my watery, olive eyes, he pulled the mic to his lips and spoke four words every girl dreamed of...-




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I want you forever, forever and always.
Through the good and the bad and the ugly.
We'll grow old together,
Forever and always.



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-"Will you marry me, Maka Albarn?" His crimson eyes were so intent on that of my forests. My hands were brought to my face and the waterworks let their course run.

"Yes!" I sniffled and sobbed while trying to vigorously wipe my eyes. "I will marry you, Soul Eater Evans." My boyfriend--no, now my fiance--slipped the metal onto my left ring finger, smiled and stood to brush his pants off.

He wrapped me in his arms and pressed his tender lips to mine. Papa was watching everything from the front row but didn't get up on stage to rip me from my lover; it was partly because he was restrained by the cheering party-goers surrounding him.

"Soul, I love you."

"I love you too, Maka."-



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She pulled up to the entrance.
She walked up to the front desk.
They led her down a million halls, a maze that's never ending.
They talk about what happened, but she can barely hear them.
She tries to keep a straight face as she walks into the room.
She sits by his bedside, holds his hand too tight
They talk about the kids they're gonna have and the good life.
The house on the hillside, where they would stay.



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I got out of my car and entered the school. Nygus-sensei was waiting out at the front to accompany me with to the infirmary. I could hear Spirit and Shinigami-sama discussing Soul, but I couldn't catch quite what they were saying. Trying not to furrow my brows or show any sign of fear, the nurse and I entered the patient's room where Soul lay in a bed.

He had bandages wound around his skull and all over his chest, middle, and arms. Oxygen tubes pierced into his nostrils and I couldn't help but to let tears fill my orbs. "Soul..." I ran over to his bed and sat on the side to take his hand into mine. I squeezed our palms together, just a little too tightly, but we neither of us seemed to care. "Remember, Soul? You said one day we'll have three or four kids? And then we'd live on the hillside in my dreamhouse? Remember all of that?" I was hysteric and bawling my eyes out with each word. "You...you promised all of this, remember? We didn't get married, yet. We have to be married before before we can raise our family. We have to get married before we go and live at the foot of the hill. "


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Stay there forever, forever and always.
Through the good and the bad and the ugly.
We'll grow old together, and always remember
Whether rich or for poor or for better,
We'll still love each other, forever and always.



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"Maka, I love you. Just remember that...okay? I'll always love you." Soul was barely audible. Even so, I rubbed his cheek.


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Then she gets an idea and calls in the nurses.
Brings up the chaplain and he says a couple verses.
She borrows some rings from the couple next door,
Everybody's laughing as the tears fall on the floor
She looks into his eyes, and she says:



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"Hold on!" I dashed to get Nygus-sensei to bring the chaplain here to marry Soul and I together.

The man quickly came and spoke a couple of verses before saying, "Soul Eater Evans, do you take Maka Albarn as your lawfully wedded wife?" The groom nodded an 'I do.' "And Maka Albarn, do you take Soul Eater Evans as your lawfully wedded husband?" In the same manner, I replied to his question. "Then you may now kiss the bride. We gently moved our lips in sync with one another; Soul's kiss felt so weak...he barely had enough strength to kiss me...

By the time I looked up from the lip-lock, the whole gang was watching, waterfalls flowing from each and everyone of their eyes and dripping to the floor. We all knew what was coming.


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I want you forever, forever and always
Through the good and the bad and the ugly
We'll grow old together, and always remember
Whether happy or sad or whatever
We'll still love each other, forever and always
Forever and always, forever and always.



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"Now we can go start a family and live on the hills, right, Soul? I love you...I love you with all my heart."

"My beautiful Maka...I love you, too...I love you, too..."


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She finishes the vows but the beeps are getting too slow
His voice is almost too low
As he says, I love you forever, forever and always
Please just remember even if I'm not there
I'll always love you, forever and always.



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The line went flat. Soul's crimson irises glassed over and his grip on my hand loosened. "S...Soul...?" No response. "SOOOOOUUULLLL!!!!" Burrowing my face into his lifeless chest, I sobbed and hiccuped. Soul was gone.
i love this song so much.~ it's so sad though.~ Dx

this little short story is pretty sad too.~ :c

song: "Forever and Always" by Parachute. here's a link--> [link]

it's the first time i wrote a short fanfic with a song. so please, no hating. ^-^

well, enjoy, even though it's really sad.~
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kykytiger Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconcriesplz:
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NatNat12998 Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOUL IS DEAD!? CAN NOT HANDLE IT!!!
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Garburn Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*sigh* listen you have spirit and a good future with this writing stuff but when it comes to a story about a well known couple like Soul and Maka. Someone can not just let one of them die before they got to live their lives together at least make it a short maybe 3 chapter story where something happens and they DO get to be together like maybe it was a coma or a poison that makes you go into a very long sleep with low vitals but everyone THINKS their dead. thank you for letting me speak, im not hating your work oh no! but gifting you the knowledge needed to create bigger, better MAGNIFICENT works of ART. I only dream that you take this donation of wisdom to heart and dream another dream of love. thank you.

                                    -Gabriel "Garburn" Craig  2014
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Mioary1010 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student General Artist
OMFG I'M CRYING SO HARD RIGHT NOW. WHY?????????!?!?!?!?!?!
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cookiecazares Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
I'm crying my eyes out here and what song is itr
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SoMaFan12 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student General Artist
I say MEDUSA DID THIS CUT OFF HER HEAD AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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jojo1234321 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student Artist
i love the story but ehy did soul die  i mean why why why and im soo crying now
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Deaththegiirl888 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
I love you're story! but why did he have to die? :(
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RavennaNoir13 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
That is so sad and depressing if you read it twice but the second time with the song.
I am legit crying right now.
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HarleyQuinn12345 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
*breaths in and hold it in for a few sec.* ........AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SOUL NO!!!
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ValerieCFrechmann Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
parachute lyrics.
nice one
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mylifesucksgetoverit Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so sad but how did he die???
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's up for you to decide.
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mylifesucksgetoverit Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh kk i say pnuemonia
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RavennaNoir13 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
really a lung disease that could easily be treated from home and you even spelled it wrong genius.
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mylifesucksgetoverit Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well i was only saying something not too harsh and i almost died from it twice when i was a kid so yeah, and i'm not very good at spelling
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GreenNatureGirl Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
I have been reduced to nothing but a puddle of tears!! Aw narks!! One of my contacts came out.... they tend to do that when I cry and this time.... its.all.your. FAULT!!! But it was great so bravo.
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OlafTheNinja Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That was so sad :iconepicsadfaceplz:
BRAVO! BRAVO!
Well done over all. I love how you used the song in themed with the fan fiction. I always get emotional when I read things when one of the main characters die. Titanic for example, I cried for and hour straight xD.
You're playing with my emotions right now :iconepicsadfaceplz:
You're a genius at literature :meow:
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I'm very glad you like it! Haha playing your emotions is exactly what I wanted. (; lolol

thank you again!
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wolvefan29 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
great fan action but sad
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you c: But yea, I know. lol
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GoreyPsychoChick Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
DAFUQHAPPENEDTOSOUL???????? :iconepicsadfaceplz:
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol I have no idea. xD Use your imagination c:
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GoreyPsychoChick Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Okay um... He was attacked by a bunch of space bananas and without Maka there he couldn't turn into a wepon to be handled with so he punched a space banana and they got mad and shot him with millions of high tech lazers! :D
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol okay! That works!
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GoreyPsychoChick Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
That's not really what I think but I was just trying to be funny. XD
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lolol, well yea. But it still works. xD

In my mind, it's a terrible car accident. Or something. lol
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GoreyPsychoChick Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lol something. Anything can happen in your imagination. XD
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol yea. xDD
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VittyVayLove42 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Another great fan fiction :D
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you! c:
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MyChEmIcAlRoMaNcE2 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Student General Artist
I started crying when I finished now my throat and eyes hurt D,:
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awh I'm sorry D:
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blackmistress1 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Writer
good job
pooor soul!
T-T
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :3

and yea D:
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blackmistress1 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Student Writer
welcome
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EMStrife Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This was one of the saddest things ever... you have done a great job. I wish i could hear more but of course, Soul is gone:(
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yea, it is pretty sad D: but thank you!
Yea, he is...:c
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Novaprime12 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ZOMBIE SOUL!!!!!
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL no, sorry that can't happen XDD
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Novaprime12 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwwwww.
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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Novaprime12 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Im not a artist. I am a writer, a reader, and a dreamer. When I dream, I see things lesser humans will never see. And I see things the way they are meant to be seen. A tree is a sentient being, as well as a rock. Or a car, that truly talks. Stars, with smiles on their faces, and the sea always roars like the lion.

Just imagine what you could see if you let go of logic and science, and enjoy the world for what it is, not what it was or what it will be. let go of logic, science, and everything else that blocks the minds imagination. And truly become, a Greater Human. See things that are not normally seen. Find ways to explain things that have no meaning. And find the meaning of life, without questions. Dream, let your mind truly be able to Dream a Dream like no other Dream. Drift away in Dreams. When you let your mind drift away from this noise and confusion you get a look beyond logic's illusion. I am truly free because I saw beyond the illusion. Soaring ever higher, I can never fly too high. To truly be free, one must Dream.
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h4e Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
OH MY F GOD THIS IS SO SAD! still loved it though.... almost made me cry xd
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know. D: but I'm glad you liked it (: awh, sorry it almost made you cry! D:
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h4e Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
it's ok. I cry for everything some times. and I really mean anything xd one day it was cloudy and I was super tired and still had some time before (finally) arriving home, so I randomly listened to a slow song and started crying as if someone died.
But whatever, I like your tragic-love-stories xd
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh haha.~ xDD yea, I cry from an atmosphere like that and from songs too. D:

Thank you, I'm glad you do. (:
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bearsoulz Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
:( this is wonderful writing....but im balling my eyes out right now...
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mudkipzRkewl Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you~ but awh, sorry it made you cry! D:
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alonegothictomboy Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist
ouch me and you like these kinds of things but i'm strong so i didn't cry even though i thought i was and i like how you made maka and soul act you r a awesome writer
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